One thing that I noticed was the way you are not explaining to the readers what is happening exactly, just like the other reviewed stories, your story introduces directly into a pace of an already started story. A bit of a background would help me a lot and other readers to understand what was happening.
A recommendation would be to introduce the characters, the pacing and what can we expect from the second episode.
One thing that bothered me was the contrast for a few pages.
This one is an example of which I think that the contrast was too lowered (or maybe I'm dumb and that's just the brush xD)
For the rest, I like the way of using the "fused-panels" in different aspects, really clever, and the art looks good <