Happy New Year!
Thanks for your feedback.
Chewing Gum An Angel's Mission prologue started with a concert. The first chapter of my story introduces the main character who is a drummer in his band.
I even have an original quote about music before the prologue even started.
"Music is like love. The lyrics are the words of your heart. The melody is the rhythm of your soul."
It doesn't mean that because I don't have lyrics in my story, that it is not a story about music. I can say that my story is really about music since it tackles about concerts, bands, and their original songs.
Your idea about including lyrics in my story is good. In fact, I already included original lyrics in my succeeding chapters that aren't posted here in Tapas.
The music that I put from SoundCloud are the songs that inspired me to write this story. I just want to share it to my readers. 
If the readers don't like those songs, they can stop the background music.
I respect your opinion if you think the opposite way.
I already seek out feedback from the forums, and it is very helpful.
Yes, the community here is great!
I have a positive feedback about Chewing Gum An Angel's Mission which inspires me to continue writing. Aside from the positive feedback, I also received good advices on how to improve my craft. I will always remember the advices as I continue writing my stories.
About the spelling errors you've mentioned, I made sure that after I've wrote my chapters I run a spell-check and before I post the episodes of my stories here in Tapas, again I run the spell-check. I'll keep in mind what you said about the spelling errors.
For Angel Warriors, thank you for your feedback.
