About Distant Stars. I don't have enough to go on with just 1 page. However, i'll be sure to go back and check it again.
The Timeless Zodiac is good and I like how you're trying to write a modern fantasy. Fair warning though i'm not a fan of the chosen one trope. It's possible I unsub in the future.
A piece of advice from a writer to another. You're not very consistent with updates. If you want to gain a following I suggest you work on it.