A big thank you! (link your work)

spicy_sweets 2017-12-29 07:23:33 UTC #81

Holy hell that was fast. Thanks! I really enjoYed writing them and want to improve with every new platform. (*´∀｀)

Makes sense! It's tough reading (and writing) in the pov of a brat. cx

ChristodeBoyet 2017-12-29 07:30:49 UTC #82

Are you talking about the story you have on here? No, I didn't just read it, I read it a few days ago. When you put it up in the forums.

Yeah lol, she used a lot of words that a kid just wouldn't know. Unless you can spin it to where she learned from adults. It would make sense then.

ChristodeBoyet 2017-12-29 07:57:59 UTC #83

Your art is so smooth! Cosette is an absolute angel too! Love her design.

VibrantFox 2017-12-29 07:58:23 UTC #84

I'm glad that you're enjoying the community! I've been here almost three years and that's been my main reason for sticking around along with the almost constant positivity. But I guess I'll add my comic too

diestreve319 2017-12-29 08:11:24 UTC #85

Hi!
I posted the four short chapters here in Tapas.
I would love to know your comments about it.
Here is my story:

Here is my another story:
I posted the three short chapters here in Tapas.

I would love to know your feedback on both stories. If it's okay with you, can you please tell me which story of mine you like better?

Thanks for your time.

Happy reading!
Happy holidays too!

ChristodeBoyet 2017-12-29 08:16:51 UTC #86

Good sir, I happen to enjoy dark fantasy and plus I want to find out where this spirit realm goes.

arushiangelica 2017-12-29 09:21:40 UTC #87

Well @ChristodeBoyet you already subscribe to my comic Existentialist Crisis but you can check out my slice of life novel Beautiful Rebellious Brainiacs

ChristodeBoyet 2017-12-29 09:27:19 UTC #88

Sorry, I'm not into it. I did go to one of your later episodes and check it out. I like how you're improving your art, keep up with it. I would like to help you a little.

It appears you're still having trouble with speech bubbles and smoothing out your images. I suggest you ask some of the other comic creators for help here on the forums. Don't be afraid to ask for help, this community is great for feedback.

ChristodeBoyet 2017-12-29 10:05:46 UTC #89

Woooahhh! A full blown science fiction with no fantasy elements, you got yourself a sub.

ChristodeBoyet 2017-12-29 10:43:59 UTC #90

Privates sword arm is mighty only when a back is facing him.

ChristodeBoyet 2017-12-29 11:31:56 UTC #91

I like that you have so much dialogue in your comic. Gives your characters a real personality. Fair warning though, if I lose interest along the way I'll unsub.

yondoloki 2017-12-29 11:36:27 UTC #92

Thanks to you too!! Here's my comic ^^

ChristodeBoyet 2017-12-29 11:50:21 UTC #93

Spranger bears got me because I've done it with a couch. Grocery days made me laugh so hard. All in all, you've got great humor!

RedMoonDragon 2017-12-29 11:56:32 UTC #94

Here is mine for your consideration.

ChristodeBoyet 2017-12-29 12:37:08 UTC #95

For The Simple Things. I think life has day-to-day moments that are great and you put your life to good use in this.

For Whiteboard Reviews I immediately subbed after reading the third episode. Because your reviews are similar to what I think of the games. I figured it would be helpful to look at when I consider buying a game. Can I recommend Front Mission 3? It's a goodie, but old game. This game has two branching storylines and each decision matters. I also ask that you invest your time on the network, which in the game is like the internet. Decrypting sites was so fun for me. I literally had a notebook with 20-30 pages filled with nothing but passwords. Each site you decrypt either adds lore to the game or unlocks more parts for wanzers. It's a tactical rpg, I hope you have fun with it.

kyupol 2017-12-29 13:25:41 UTC #96

Feel free to read mine... (warning: very long read lol)

ChristodeBoyet 2017-12-29 13:48:29 UTC #97

It's all good if it's a long read, so don't worry about it.

spicy_sweets 2017-12-29 14:18:22 UTC #98

Ah jeez, I think I misunderstood. When you said you read 2 stories, I thought you read cpc all the way up to the current chapter + the short story. Whoops cx

ChristodeBoyet 2017-12-29 14:25:05 UTC #99

I read one chapter of both and they both have an interesting premise. For CPC it's because I wanted to wait to finish the rest here, so that I could sub to you. Plush Love I also read one, but I just didn't like it enough to continue it on. You really do have an interesting premise for both and definitely deserve more readers.

ChristodeBoyet 2017-12-29 14:29:47 UTC #100

If you want since I'm doing this thread just drop a link to Plush Love and I'll finish it up. Plus, it helps to get your story out there.