A feedback and review would be helpful

@Ranty-cat Ranty Cat
Tue, 23 Feb 2021 02:41:13 +0000

So, I just posted the first episode of my new series. I want to take my time for each episodes. So, having a review of the first episode will give me some idea on how to and how not to describe the story in future, and if everything is okay. Should I follow this style and carry on? Or, should I modify some part of the writing style? Anything that requires more work?
Thanks!

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Tower Defense | Tapas

Four friends who accidentally stepped into a portal and rendered themselves transferred into a dystopian world full of monstrous creatures.