A weird thing that happened to me on discord once

@NickRowler Nick Rowler
Sat, 19 Aug 2023 07:42:41 +0000

@NickRowler wrote:

You don’t really need to write a report…this isn’t school. Honestly I learned the most about writing from just listening podcasts and YouTube videos of people talking about movies and media.

As for your character, my concern is that you describe him in a very negative way. He’s bullied, friends mistreat him, bad parents, avoids talking due to speech impairment. What are his positive traits? Where are the people in his life who support him? What is his emotional drive as a character? Does he want positive change in his life? Is this his villain origin story?

You don’t really need to give me an answer, it’s just something you can just think about.