I think sometimes... you just gotta take the plunge and trust that it'll be okay. I completely get where you're coming from though, because it's so easy to be like "...they're gonna notice how weird this looks... they're gonna notice..." The pages I felt most stressed about this have been the car scenes in Errant, where I wasn't sure if people would be okay with seatbelts kinda vanishing off into the ether to avoid drawing a ton of car interiors in every panel (uughhh).
This page in particular, I was like "this isn't going to work...is it? I can't just have the back seat floating in space...can I?"
But.... I think it works! The audience certainly didn't comment "lol floating car seat" (and my audience probably would call me out on something if they thought it looked weird
) Because it does what I wanted it to of preparing us for Rekki's flashback and showing that she's drawing into those memories and sinking into her deep feelings, and right now, only she and Subo exist in that moment, exploring Rekki's teenage regrets.
Basically, believe in yourself! Believe in your ability to make choices that will engage the audience emotionally, or amuse them or dazzle with enough strength that they get caught up in it all and stop really even noticing the stylisation, and the visual metaphors will feel like they're telling an emotional truth rather than simply not telling a literal one. You can do it! 