Are my character design interesting?

@ghostly ghostly
Thu, 09 Jul 2020 16:22:46 +0000

@ghostly wrote:

This is a lot of characters, but they aren't all main characters! I'm planning 3 or 4 books and except for Belora and some others, they don't appear in all of them! In fact, two of these characters(Menyne and Hysto) dies in the first chapters of Book 1 and one other character(spoiler!) dies at the end of Book 1!

As for the goth thing, it's how their people dress! It's true that I should make the piercings more diverse though!

I'm not sure how Belora and Nerara are similar except for their skin color and their piercings though!

Thanks for the critique!!