My name is Vyper and here is a quick review of your comic, WDE!
The art is pretty cute! The style works well with a comic that centers around humor. I do notice that the style you use seems to change often. I think it's a good idea to try and experiment, but too much change can be a little off putting. Personally, I liked the art style from episode 7 - 15 as I thought it best represented the lighthearted nature of your comic.
There are quite a few grammatical errors throughout the comic and I believe this is the biggest drawback to your comic. Luckily, this is an easy fix! Consider typing out your sentences in a Word Document or your Google Docs. Check for spelling errors and make sure to re-read your work to fix words without the proper suffixes (-ing, -ation, -ed, -ly).
You have very straightforward and easy to follow paneling, which is great for a comic centering around humor. I never had to question which panel I was supposed to read next. Solid work!
This is a pretty cute and simple comic! I liked the silly jokes between your characters. However, some of it is hard to follow and it's mostly due to the writing. As I mentioned before, there were quite a few grammatical errors and missing words in the middle of sentences that take away from the humor. If people have to try and decipher what your characters are saying, the jokes may go over their head!
In the end, all that I've mentioned is only the opinion of one person. If you don't agree with what I've said, that is okay! This is your comic, do what makes you happy!
Keep up the good work,