Hi, everyone,
I need help with my blurbs. Any rewrites, suggestions, and comments are appreciated a lot 
Here they are:
You're My Light
Naila and Jace made a promise to meet in a secret meeting place, no matter what happens. These two different people find themselves tied together by fate. Will they realize the true love they've been searching for is just right in front of them?
That Beautiful Melody
Petals of cherry blossoms touch the skies. The music hums in the light breeze of spring. In every heartbeat, unfolds a story of love. Who’ll win Tomoyo’s heart?
Cute Boy Hunting
Jessie's life turns interesting when she sees an extremely cute boy at Starbucks. Since then her life is full of color and filled with cuteness. What will she do if that cute boy she hunts realizes her secret? Will she lie or be straightforward about it?
Stars of Butterfly
"I came to the open window of my room and lay on my bed, waiting for the morning light to come to transform me back to who I really was. I often wondered how it happened. Maybe it was not the time for me to know. All I can think about is if that guy would remember me, even if I was just a beautiful butterfly."
First Rose
Liza always believed that she’ll meet her destined love.
But being a teenager and finding someone who’ll love her is difficult especially since her classmates often criticize her appearance.
Luckily, a mysterious secret admirer with the name XY Rain changed everything, turning Liza’s life into her dream-like romance similar to her favorite manga.
He gave her not only just a love letter but her first rose.
Now, she’s on the hunt to find out who he is. She has three suspects: Mike (her annoying yet truly handsome best friend) Ryan (her past crush, who is cute and sweet) and Travis (her current crush, who is popular with the girls and is beyond charming)
Who among them is guilty of falling in love with her?
