HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII[quote="drownsrenae, post:1, topic:23214"]If I could get some constructive criticism on my novel that would be great. Please tell me the truth but don't be rude. Here's the link to my storyhttps://tapas.io/dashboard/index
The link is to the creator dashboard (localized to be whoever clicks the link) not your story.
EDIT: I think I found you!
YUP FOUND IT
Is there a reason (almost) all the chapters are only a sentence or so long? With all the text you have currently, I don't think it would amount to enough material for a whole chapter. Interesting idea, though! If you want constructive criticism and are open to getting advice to help you improve, @Penni has a waiting list for critiques right now! Check out her thread:
Yeah, the really short updates are the biggest hindrances right now. When Tapas says 'bite-sized' they mean more like 500 words per episode at the minimum haha. Keeping whole scenes or chunks of thought together is better for pacing.
Thank for the shout out
I will take a look if @leafydudette wishes
oh ok ill do that also yes i do wishes that penni sees it
Sure thing. I have a bit of a list going so it might be a little bit before I get to yours. Is that ok?