ok read , enjoyed and took a few notes.
first of all i think i should point out to the other forum members that its a crime this comic has been posted since April and only has five subs! whats wrong with that? it's a well draw and written comic!
a few things to point out. (but nothing bad)
you need to work on your bubble order a bit, there are places where it's a bit confusing who speaks first. research about bubble placement and page flow.
the little notes you leave now and again on the side are kind of hard to read when using a desktop.
i never noticed too much wrong with the English (but I'm crap at grammar myself)
where crimson said "you young witches are in many troubles" should be "in a lot of trouble"
other than than i think you should do well with this comic given a bit more time and i hope people get behind it for you.