Hello to any fellow writers/readers reading this thread!
I have a fairly straightforward request, and hopefully I'll be able to get some feedback from some of you. Recently I've uploaded the first two chapters of my novel to this platform, and while I generally aim to keep them under a certain length, the second chapter in particular came out much longer than that. I'd be happy to hear from any of you who might find the story interesting whether it is indeed too long to read, or works in this particular context. I could break it off into two chapters, though I'm a little concerned it might ruin the flow.
My story can be found in the link below, and the chapter in question is chapter 2.
Also, and though I have another thread up here with a similar offer, if you have any work you'd like my feedback on in return, I'd be happy to do so.
Feel free to comment here or send me a PM