[CLOSED] I will read your first chapter and give feedback! NOVELS ONLY, SORRY [CLOSED]

[Lingering_Wanderer]

My story has been around on Tapas for a while (got featured a few times too)

Garden of Severed Wills is an urban & action fantasy, and it's first chapter is something rather... experimental. There's enough content to binge read and I hope you enjoy!

Read Garden of Severed Wills | Tapas Web Community

[AlSanders]

Hi everyone!
If you’re looking for a story filled with revenge, pain, and intense battles, my novel The Shadow of Spirit might be just for you.

It tells the story of Kaito, a young boy seeking vengeance in a world scarred by a war that ended a thousand years ago — a war that completely changed the very concept of humanity.

Within some people dwell spirits, and those who can harness their powers are known as Wielders.

Kaito will have to face many of them on his path to achieve his goal.

Link to story: https://tapas.io/series/The-Shadow-of-Spirit-

[escapemyshadow]

[The Water Is Fine] is just right for you if you are interested in ....

Slow Burn
BL
Traumatic Events
Two Side healing
Comedy during a tense period

Do give it a chance! Thank you!

Read The Water Is Fine | Tapas Web Community

[Anastasiia]

Hello everyone. I'm new here. I'm posting my fantasy romance novel, "The Wheel of Time." It's a love story that began in ancient Carthage and continues to our days. I'd really like to know your opinion and your rating.

[lomamadoualpha47]

Check out " An Eye That Sees Everything" from EXITCODE (english) on Tapas: https://tapas.io/episode/3618028

[gullyfourmyle]

Hello MHSly,

I've just hit the Share button to post and share my new Novel, The Devil's Daughters. It is apparently here somewhere but I have no idea where. There don't seem to be any instructions about what to do next. You appear to be the default choice that makes this entire website work. I hope you can find mine and tell me what I need to do next. Besides that, I hope you read the entire novel. Assuming you are older than 18, that is.

And, yes, I'll read your work and give you honest, useful feedback if necessary.

[gullyfourmyle]

This is a weird set up. I can't tell whether or not I'm talking to MHSly or myself. Anyway, if it's you MHSly, I did read one of your four page novels and left you some important information. I hope it helps.

[MHSly]

Hi all, sorry for the sad news but unfortunately I have become too busy in my personal life to continue giving feedback. Good luck with your writing! ~MHSly