@blackanimelover okay, that was a fast read
Anyways, here's my two cents:
Art: The art is very solid. The character's expressions are on point, the action scenes are really clear and the overall character designs and execution is good! I rarely thought "what the hell are they doing?" in panels.
I do think that the distance between some pages is sometimes absent, leading to some awkward transitions between pages (and I'm sorry if I used a example of your pages without permission:)
Story:
I can't really say too much about the story as it barely started really. But:
First off, I'm really glad you decided to use a brief prologue. Nothing turns me away from comics more than a lengthy prologue.
That being said, I feel your prologue is a bit abrupt and it could perhaps be a little bit longer? I feel like I'm missing where the original MAO went after the five mages defeated him.
I think the characters are fine, they seem realistic and "deep" enough for manga characters. Though the "tropy" scenes of the boob hug and the clothes taking off talk wasn't really my cup of tea and felt a tad bit cliche to me, but eh, who am I to say?
The "mc has a dark side" plot point is not overdone and feels fine to me so far (unironically I make use of that too in mine). Make sure to show how the mc figured out he has the dark side within him, because that is a important detail as it seems he already knows about it in chapter 3.
Well, that's about it. Can't really say where the story is going so far as it just started but aside from some very minor things it seems very solid so far. Good job and keep going!