@lordsomething36 alright, it's time for Uber Upgrades! Not to be confused with Uber Eats at all costs!
So you mentioned the art would be one of the points of critique, and I would be lying if I said it isn't. But I'll keep it short and simple because I don't want to rant about it and actually look into your story and the flow of your comic. My main points about your art do include these though:
- The anatomy is rather... rough and disproportionate. I suggest looking into human anatomy and dividing the different body parts in "shapes" to help you construct the body of your characters.
- You tend to use hand-written text in some panels. I'd suggest to stick with fonts for now, as hand-written text is generally hard to read.
At the flipside of the coin though, you are not too afraid to try out poses and angles, especially in the first episode. Keep it up! You'll only get better with practice (and take that from a guy whose first ever digital pages looked like this:)
Okay, now moving on to the story...
You seem to start off with a flashforward? That's what I think at least. The mc I presume clashes with some kind of villain, and the episode after it flashbacks to the mc entering a building. It's a little confusing though when what happens chronologically because it switches out of the blue without any explanation.
It's also rather early in the story, so I can't really say anything about the plot and the power system (and the UER for that matter). Keep in mind to stick to the rules you set for your battle system to keep it consistent.
That's about it really, I suggest to just keep going and improve. Don't give up and tell the story you want to tell.
@blackanimelover no problem! And yeah, I get that. I honestly do prefer the way you handled the prologue and just dived straight into the action right afterwards.