THANK YOOU That's so nice of you haha. Im actually glad you enjoyed it that much !
So buckle up because the story will only get crazier as it goes haha.
I personnaly thought there was humor, but he is right, your story starts pretty dramatic, which makes sense, there's a lot of tension and over exposition, and that's what draws me in the universe ! As long as you know how to play with seriousness and humor you're doing a good job I guess. I really like the talking boar/hog, it's so unexpected and out of place it does release a bit of all that tension caused by the situation !