I checked out your comic because you're subscribed to mine. The story is nice. It creates some questions, and then answers the questions. Also, a lot of things are gray, which helps set the tone. I'm not that interested in webcomics that have an overarching story. If I meet someone who is, I'll recommend your comic to them.
Now, here's mine for someone to read. If there's anything you think I can fix, please tell me.