I haven't seen your story yet, but I'd love to check it out! So I'll get to that as fast as I can
Here's the link to my novel
@Aykay I got to read the first few parts of your novel and here's what I thought about it. I'll leave comments on the chapters as well, but I'd like to read more before I do that It's just kind of late for me now, so I'll get to that tomorrow.
My thoughts so far
Your writing style is easy to read, at least for me. I noticed that the parts are mostly long, but for example Chapter 1 Part 3 was a bit shorter. Not sure if that intentional or not.Other than that, I really like your character's names and I think you're doing a great job with showing the characters' personalities!