Ok, I'll start
I like your comic overall, I subbed on it already. I like your characters, they have a visible personality differences, that's good imo. Also your style is cartoonish, and it's gets along with your characters well, imo.
Have you thought of... well, I don't know, that's your comic, and I don't have any ideas. Maybe except something like more explanation of your world lore, because it's interesting.
Things that you could do better, hm. Actually it's overall ok, but maybe something like more detailed backgrounds, especially on the secne with pirates. But anyway it's a minor thing, for most part everything is fine. Characters is looking good imo.
Ok, now it's my turn.
My comic is The Unnecessary Man. Yeah,I'm not so cool at creating names, ¯ \ _ (ツ) _ / ¯
Synopsis is simply. My comic is about adventures of police officer, who is currently is in undercover operation (actually it's finished already). Later it will be continuing adventures as ordinary officer on duty. And in later parts, far beyond it. Not so deep synopsis, and it shouldn't be, actually.
Message, hm. No message, at all, I don't know why I should have one. It's just an action comic, you know. Basically I want to cover all types of action works, now it's "police part", later will be others. With one character, timeline, etc.
Inspirations. Many of them, movies, video games, books. Classics from 1980s is all here. And films by my favourite movie directors of course (Michael Mann is my favourite of all times for sure), of course I'm not even a close to them and probably never be, but that's a good bar to follow, imho. For the FPS style is Far Cry 2 for sure, I played it back in the school, and that was groundbreaking thing for me. Since then I was obsessed with drawing action scenes FPS-style. For the police part my main inspiration is books about 87th Precinct, I always liked them.
So here is the link