Tadah! My review has arrived!
So, I actually really liked how you set up the scene in the prologue. You writing is overall very descriptive and does a great job when creating the setting. I also like how you set up the characters in a natural way, they fit well with the setting.
As already mentioned, there are a couple a grammar errors in there, none that really ruin anything, but definitely something to look out for.
I think I've mentioned this in another post before, but something that really helps me when editing and refining my writing is to read it out loud, or have someone/something else read it to you. It really helps when picking out the bugs in your writing. There are some online readers you could use to do this if you don't have someone readily available or don't want to read aloud yourself.
I would also be wary of word choice and how they fit in sentences.
English is a weird language and it would definitely take some time and practice to get used to, but it's worth it in the end.
Overall, it's a really nice story! I've enjoyed it so far and look forward to reading more, so definitely keep going!
(Also, just a quick note for my novel if I haven't already mentioned it before: It's literal trash. So, we wary of that. Hopefully, with enough effort, I can redo it someday so that it might actually be readable, but for now, I'm just having fun with it so feel free to have at it with the critique. Best parts, worst parts. All that good jazz...)