Hey read through it and have some pointers for future updates.
I think adopting a scroll format for the pages will really help readers to understand the order of events as they happen, this is something I struggled with and try to improve upon with each update. Fight scenes can get very messy and confusing if the reader doesn’t know what’s going on so keep a eye on that.
Also I don’t know if your writing your text or not but if you are try looking into digital fonts for dialogue to be read easier.
You have decent art which can also be improved but everything starts with having it appear clean and viewer friendly so start there for sure.
Really do like the energy of the fight though, so you have something to work with and a base to start from.
Happy future drawing