Your artwork is great. Has a Street Fighter II vibe to it. You put in some very difficult poses/perspective/forshortening and it all looks great. Production is top notch.
Your story, although very new, is so far very hard to follow. Well, the dialogue confused me. I have no idea what is going on or who the characters are. I kept reading to get to the dialogue, and when I did, I just didn't understand. This is all with the text/dialogue. Your visual story telling is great. Everything flows from panel to panel
So you only have 3 pages up, so this may all go away, and you might be trying to jar people at the beginning, I am not sure. I am not even sure who I am rooting for, and if there is a good guy/bad guy.
Also, your description of the comic is very confusing. Someone may click on to see if they are even remotely interested, but your description tells them nothing.
You might see if someone can help you script this. So you plot it out, draw it, then have someone else help out with the dialogue, especially if English is your second language, which I think I saw somewhere.
Once again, your artwork is outstanding, keep up the great work.