Could you review my novel?

[Spoonyenertainment]

If you have time you coud read my novel
Its a fantasy,comedy,action series
Its going to be a really long series
First of all i want things that im doing wrong
But also what im doing right
And what did you like about it
I upload every day!

Drunk Souls | Tapas

[sevenstarsofeightIam]

I see promise in your story concept. I read the prologue. I would suggest that as you advance, you run your chapters through an app like Grammarly. I use the extension for Chrome and I can attest that it has raised my writing level from basic to polished.

[Spoonyenertainment]

Thanks for the advice!