Been a while! I decided to come back and see what's new on this forum.
@navyzerimar I remember seeing your comic a few months back, don't know why I didn't subscribe! It looks very promising, and I'm glad you brightened up the pages a bit. I'll have to go back and read through it again to catch up on the story. If I had one small note to give you, it would be that Warren's speech bubbles are a tad dark to have black text on them. I would suggest bumping up their value slightly (though it's not too bad.) It's also great to see you are updating consistently. That's very important!
@Lirelya I can't say much for Dark&Lya since it seems to have just started, but the format you have for it is perfect for the mobile platform. Fluff Division seems similarly laid out, and I'm sure you can find an audience for LoL players (I've never gotten into it). Medley looks like fun, a nice and simple way to promote your work. Best of luck!
@crstalwolf I read through what you have, while the plot so far is a bit vague, I'm sure you'll expand on it with more updates! Even though you only have a few updates, I can tell you have a good dynamic going between your two characters. There's also something oddly charming about the sketchy style you have, I can't quite put my finger on it. I can't really offer any worthwhile critiques yet because there's not much to go off of, but stick to it and one glorious day... I might!!!!!!
@cleo_san I am very impressed by your page composition. Do you use a script or a rough draft before putting these pages together? If I could offer any friendly advice, it would be to try and push yourself further with your shot angles. So far I've only seen drawings from eye level, I think mixing it up will add a lot of visual interest to your pages (although there's nothing wrong with straight-on angles, they definitely serve a purpose!). Also, I don't think you need a warning for the first page, it's great!
@aerdinyar Well, you have 10 subscribers with only one page, so... I'm jealous. I can't offer any advice because it's just one page, but I'll keep an eye out for updates!
Great work people! Everyone check out these comics please!
(and maybe mine maybe just a bit hehe Greengarten)