Thanks for the critique!! Yeah, rev exchanges are really fun to do, and also rewarding! I’ve already chosen a new, and I hope permanent, font for Chapter 2, so I’m on the way to edit the whole Chapter 1
Let’s get down to the review!
I’ve just finished reading all your comic, it looks pretty good!! I really like the path the story is taking with all the trime-traveler scheme and Harper tired of her ordinary life. Even though this is just the beginning of the comic it just opens so many doors to different plot lines around other times that I can’t wait to see!!
About the art, I think the monochromatic scheme you’re using suits your comic very well, mainly cause I associate black and white with different times. The anatomy is well studied and worked, the only thing I’d say is that some action scenes look a little stiff, maybe if you used some movement distortion, motion blur or even by just exaggerating more the movement it would look better.
I’m not usually into pages with more than 5/6 panels, but in your case it looks good since it gives a chaotic and quick feeling to the fight scenes. It’s just my opinion as someone who makes exaggeratedly big pannels, so don’t take it by heart XD
I LOVE the way you do the lettering, it looks super smooth, nice and pro! Also the characters are, as far as I have seen, pretty unique and different from each other, something which I really appreciate cause it really annoys me when all the characters act and talk the same way.
Overall I really like how you’re doing it, can’t wait to see more!!