For Trapped by the Mafia, I had sliced everything that i have in the episodes, and still have to edit a few.
For the WIP, I am writing a scene blending the sci-fi machinery and the build up of the feelings. Looking forward to the next chapter that has a soft romantically colored tone.
I am still not sure just how far I want to go with the bedroom content, but I will see what pans out. No editing on the WIP, I think, until I have the Trapped editing done. I just have a hard time switching between the two.
Here is the preliminary log-line for the WIP:
When an ancient debt comes due, harming an innocent, a starved orphan must interface his werewolf instincts with the sci-fi tech to save the victim--or go off the grid. Try doing it while in love with the creditor!