Yes, this story is def not YA. (I chose above excerpt because it was one of the only ones I could post without getting in trouble.) I did keep the two-paragraph break because I think it reads better in this format.
Thank you for your input!
I do this all the time. I try my best to make the text easy reading
I've never really thought about that sort of thing. Though I have noticed how different things look on a computer vs on a phone, like it looks like a lot more text on a cell phone than on my laptop.
I did keep the two-paragraph break because I think it reads better in this format.
