Does this come across as the woman not really having much control on the stability or the zoom of a home camera? If not what should I do to make it clear that I'm not doing weird jump cuts?

[drewdoniger]

Never mind the context, I just wanna make sure I'm getting amateur baby videographer from early 90s vibe down. Also if you couldn't tell by the numbers at the bottom, this is two different pages, so work with that how you will.

[jwabeasley]

Overall, they make sense to me. 482-d is a bit hard to read. Maybe you want some fingers in the frames? It might also help if all the video panels were 3:4 and it had the camcorder time/date stamps and *rec on all of them, but I expect you plan to add that in at the end.

[drewdoniger]

Thank you, that's very helpful. I hadn't thought about the time/date stamps for the *REC on the panels, but that's simply something I'm adding now