@Artiicus
Funny story, I was just going back in to read another chapter only to realise that it there was only one chapter available at the moment,
whoops,
oh well,
Looking forward to seeing the whole story so far,
In the mean time, I had another read of the "what we have just learnt" section at the end of chapter 1,
Solid world building based on initial details, nice parallel to Star Wars, not to mention a society whose economy/wellbeing relies far too heavily on War. There is a lot of commentary that can be made out of this.
In the words of Aquaman, I dig it,