Drop your webcomic here & I'll give feedback (Max 100subs)(CLOSED)

Bokyongyo 2021-01-30 00:06:48 UTC #18

Hey thanks for this,

I guess for my comic specifically I would like critiques on how the art looks and how the dialogue is, in terms of story just because not many story episodes are out that could be a little difficult so you can omit any story reviews.

Pommie 2021-01-30 03:35:38 UTC #19

i'm down, and curious too :3

dsptss78 2021-01-30 04:49:29 UTC #20

Thank you for this wonderful opportunity. I am currently looking at feedback on the story plot and art. Basically your overall honest opinion of my webcomic.

muskitten 2021-01-30 06:15:49 UTC #21

Thank you for this opportunity!
This is my first ever comic and I'm emotionally attached to it, I'm learning and improving with each episode I make, hope you'll like it

kitschensyngk 2021-01-30 06:48:23 UTC #22

I've got a couple worth looking into.

This is my main one, a coming-of-age story with a bit of a weird side:

My other one is a one-panel forum series which recently went on hiatus:

thecrystalrook 2021-01-30 14:27:39 UTC #23

Here's the cover from this month's episode. You can critique whatever you'd like, but if you could give some feedback on the art improvement over how many episodes you read, that'd be awesome!

All_and_None 2021-01-30 15:52:08 UTC #24

Always welcome a critique

Stargazer31 2021-01-30 16:30:39 UTC #25

I'm up for a critique!

S.K.O.M 2021-02-03 13:58:00 UTC #26

FROM THIS POINT OF THE TREAD I TAKE NO MORE WEBCOMICS TO REVIEW! Thank you for all of these, I'll do my best to check all of them and send you an review!

S.K.O.M 2021-02-03 14:15:41 UTC #27

Hi!
Thanks for dropping by. I just needed to see the title font to know this artist is skilled. I absolutely love the expressions of the characters for example.
I also like the grandma, she seems like a bad-ass lady. I especilly love that she likes videogames, you don't see a grandma like that in entertainment media!

I am not so fond of the long blank spaces between the panels tho', it kind of throws me out of the story. There are some changes that should be made to the grammar and spelling (not because I'm an expert myself!). I also noticed that the speechbubbles were misplaced in some panels in the earlier chapters (chapter 4 for example).

The main chracter is relatable and it's an easy story to follow so far!

S.K.O.M 2021-02-03 14:16:36 UTC #28

@surenlicious ogratulations!

S.K.O.M 2021-02-03 14:18:43 UTC #29

@AmazementComics e plot seems easy to follow and the characters seems to have clear personalities, however I had a hard time reading the text and the quality could be better (it's very pixly).
Otherwise, keep going!

S.K.O.M 2021-02-03 14:25:00 UTC #30

Just by looking at the first episode, I immidietly loved the design of the first shown characters. I really like the soft style and I really got curious about what is up with the boy...

S.K.O.M 2021-02-03 14:30:08 UTC #31

Lovely style, it's so expressive and raw! And the plot is interesting. Keep going!

S.K.O.M 2021-02-03 14:35:26 UTC #32

Bird brain comes of as a classic strip-comic as well all know them. The style is very fitting for the humour!

I didn't find the style fitting for the plot of FEAR, but that's just a question of taste.
Both of these series has alot of humour and I openly shuckled at some of it (and I seldom do! Kudos).

S.K.O.M 2021-02-03 14:39:20 UTC #33

I came quickly into the story and the thing about the iceberg bringing in stuff to the shores feels like a very original plot-point. The style seems to take a lot of time to draw, what with the paint-like colours.

S.K.O.M 2021-02-03 14:41:54 UTC #34

Ah, I'm sure it's great, but I'm specifically asked for comics!

Thank you tho' <3

cosmicnano11 2021-02-03 14:46:56 UTC #35

Dunno if I can post my comic on the 3rd but here is a pic

And the link

S.K.O.M 2021-02-03 14:51:08 UTC #36

First of, ok, I am a sucker for the 70's esthetic! The cover before the first episode is mwah, chefs kiss!

However, I would to had known the characters through the story, not by a picture of them and a summary of their personalities! I'm sure you could nicely put it in the plot, would feel more natural that way.
I really appreachiated the trigger warning!

Groovy stuff

S.K.O.M 2021-02-03 14:59:47 UTC #37

I'm happy I ould just slide into the plot without feeling overhelmed by all that info-drop at the beginning.
This should be proof-read before uploaded, there were quite alot of grammar- and spelling errors.
I always enjoy a classic come-to-age story, especilly one that has alot on the line!