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[S.K.O.M]

@surenlicious ogratulations!

[S.K.O.M]

@AmazementComics e plot seems easy to follow and the characters seems to have clear personalities, however I had a hard time reading the text and the quality could be better (it's very pixly).
Otherwise, keep going!

[S.K.O.M]

Just by looking at the first episode, I immidietly loved the design of the first shown characters. I really like the soft style and I really got curious about what is up with the boy...

[S.K.O.M]

Lovely style, it's so expressive and raw! And the plot is interesting. Keep going!

[S.K.O.M]

Bird brain comes of as a classic strip-comic as well all know them. The style is very fitting for the humour!

I didn't find the style fitting for the plot of FEAR, but that's just a question of taste.
Both of these series has alot of humour and I openly shuckled at some of it (and I seldom do! Kudos).

[S.K.O.M]

I came quickly into the story and the thing about the iceberg bringing in stuff to the shores feels like a very original plot-point. The style seems to take a lot of time to draw, what with the paint-like colours.

[S.K.O.M]

Ah, I'm sure it's great, but I'm specifically asked for comics!

Thank you tho' <3

[cosmicnano11]

Dunno if I can post my comic on the 3rd but here is a pic

And the link

Ignis Somnia | Tapas

[S.K.O.M]

First of, ok, I am a sucker for the 70's esthetic! The cover before the first episode is mwah, chefs kiss!

However, I would to had known the characters through the story, not by a picture of them and a summary of their personalities! I'm sure you could nicely put it in the plot, would feel more natural that way.
I really appreachiated the trigger warning!

Groovy stuff

[S.K.O.M]

I'm happy I ould just slide into the plot without feeling overhelmed by all that info-drop at the beginning.
This should be proof-read before uploaded, there were quite alot of grammar- and spelling errors.
I always enjoy a classic come-to-age story, especilly one that has alot on the line!

[S.K.O.M]

Sorry, deadline was today, I'm afraid! Maybe next time!

[S.K.O.M]

Ok, first of: DANG, that style. Reminds me of the comic SAGA (and I love that comic). Lovely style, colouring, shading and I am one huge sucker for dialouge and kick-ass ladies.

You have one more subscriber!

[S.K.O.M]

The action filled intro made me intrigued immedietly. I am especially fond of the camera-angles!

[TedGravesArt]

Thanks! That's not the first time my stuff has been likened to Saga, I'm going to have to read that!

[tbh17q]

That's some nice feedback thank you. <3

[kinleypavone]

Thanks for the feedback!

[alextsarace]

there were quite alot of grammar- and spelling errors

Some of those were made on purpose (all Al's lines), but still thank you, trying to do my best.
Glad you liked it anyway

[Fedriz_Marini]

Why thank you, that was really nice from you to say!

[CytricAcid]

thank you so much for the feedback!!
i think for the next introduction pages i'll instead put stuff that isn't really as much of a bio as much as it's character stats. age, hometown, nationality, stuff like that. a lot of the stuff mentioned does end up being displayed in the story, so more boring factoids might be better haha

[fame3874]

Thank you!

Yes the panels and grammar I know the story was originally in page format and it’s a bit confusing trying to cut and reformat into WEBTOON. Thank you for the advice and thank you so much for the kind words!!