I've seen that many members of the community have been looking for constructive criticism and for an editor to help out with their writing.
I thought I'd share my own editor with you, if you've read my threads before you've probably seen me link some of his Youtube vids.
He's a critic and Youtuber, he's very talented, though quite harsh. If you're interested you can contact him at:
He charges a rate of 20 USD per month for his editing services as well as for making a video critique request: comics, books, video games, films etc.
If you're still not convinced he's managed to transform my script writing from this:
Walls of text and exposition, to this:
Much more succinct and descriptive. (Mild spoilers for interminute)