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hey there all, things have hit me hard and need some feedback on my writing. i want to see if i let stress get in the way and what i can do to improve. please be my guest to promote your stuff, i be happy to help you all out in return.

this story is a sci-fi, survival, game theme that has action, creepy themes, and space adventure.

it is a story about the human race being devoured by an alien race, but with an invention or two these things are supposed to rebuild the human race. please check it out and leave your feedback, but please be gentle I am fragile lol.

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This is really interesting!! I subscribed~

The length of each chapter is perfect in my opinion. (I like being able to binge-read chapters!) I also really like that I, the reader, get to be the main character! I can't wait to face the locusts :joy::alien:

Season 3 coming soon! I would love feedback!

THIS IS A BETA BOOK. I WISH TO MAKE THIS A MANGA, BUT I AM NOT A GREAT WRITER. THANKS FOR YOUR HELP WITH YOUR OPINIONS, IDEAS AND SUPPORT.

I also have this series now on Webnovel and Royal Road

Kaysi Moon is a high school student with a remarkable gift—the ability to see spirits. Her world turns upside down when she unexpectedly gains the powers of a Waymaker.

​​​​​​​Kaysi faces the challenges of supernatural beings and dark forces, and Kaysi must navigate her new role as a Waymaker while unlocking the mysteries of her past.

Dealing with spiritual encounters, demonic threats, and unsettling Deja vu moments, Kaysi's destiny teeters on the brink of chaos, where the past and present are sure to collide in - Lighting Doesn't Strike Twice!

Good morning/afternoon/evening! If you are searching for something to read and see, check our graphic novel! Please consider subscribing and giving a like. We also have our own youtube channel where there will be the animated series of this graphic novel, so subscribe please! Its called Unime Studio, thank you for checking. If you comment for a shoutout in the graphic novel, you will be called in a shoutout in the channel! This novel will have realistic and raw situations that happen in real life in actuality!
Here´s the link:


Youtube channel:

Wattpad:
https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/386418614-before-man-mistakes
webtoon:

CLOSE TO 25 SUBS

Feedback is definitely really important, I'll make sure to read and give feedback when I have the time

GLASSFLOWER
URSA AND THE SCARF SQUAD
Let me tell you a tale.

From the Dead Oceans, Kumamoto Setsune reawakens after thirty hundred years. Without a home, with who knows how much time left, and with her life the target of many an Aeternum, Disaster Beast, and more, she travels towards her old home. In the Great City of Rem, she seeks to find something for herself.

Welcome to the Recycling Theatre, enjoy your stay
Genres: Fantasy, Action, Drama
Sub genres: LGBTQ, Slow Burn, Sci Fi
Inspirations: Gintama, Symphogear, Castlevania