Hey, thanks for taking so much time in reading through my work. Didn't expect you to go this far into it
First to answer your questions about my review: You can always ask your audience if one might want to help in exchange for an early access to your story or something. Some might be up for that But I'll go over some mistakes later after work, no problem (but I'm not a native speaker myself, so I might be off as well =D)
Photoshop has good tools for shapes and lines I think and there are good tutorials out there. Checking those might help a lot. I gave this a quick skim over and it seems to explain a lot. But there's much more out there so you'll surely find a tutorial that fits your needs.
I'd also recommend to invest in a tablet, but I totally understand if the money situation doesn't allow for that.
Thank you again for going so in depth. I am very thankful for the time and effort you put into your review of it!
As for the story questions: I wanted to leave it ambiguous in the beginning as to weather the infection is dangerous or not, but it will be a huge focus of chapter 5. I also used the operation in the second chapter to imply that "spreading the infection" simply refers to giving birth to new mutants. That's why they remove Silhouettes reproductive organs, when they catch her trespassing the human parts of the city. But I get how that might not be clear. I tried to tell it visually, but a little dialogue might have helped to make it clearer.
As for the change in character... hm. My goal was to show, that Silhouette might have been a little indifferent, when the human injustices didn't affect her directly, but discovered her drive for revenge, when she got hurt herself. It's tricky. She really doesn't care for the rebellion, but she very much cares about hurting the people, that hurt her. It's...not easy to convey stuff like that, but I'll try to improve so it gets more clear in the future. In my head it all makes sense, so it's hard to guess how much explaining needs to be done, haha.
The proportion and art consistency thing really is a huge challenge for me. The pages of chapter 1 are two years old at this point, so I like to imagine I got a bit better at that, but it's still challenging. I'll keep practicing. Have to do it with every new page anyways Thanks for the feedback on the profile view. I didn't even notice that most of the time.
Yeah well... I got some one star ratings that dragged me down, I think. I get why. It's a comic about people, who are pretty much terrorists. And the drawings could also use a bit of work. But I'm of course not happy with how it is received. I can't really help it for now. Maybe it'll gain some more fans in the future, but for now it is, how it is. I am glad that you enjoyed it so far. So thank you for your thorough feedback.