Feedback exchange!

wufargia 2018-07-24 03:57:14 UTC #21

Wowowowow-! Thanks a lot for taking the time to write out such a thoughtful feedback lettusbear! Will definitely take your comments into consideration for future episodes ^-^

I understand what you mean when you mentioned the car-to-home transition dissipates the tension... I guess I was trying to show the dramatic difference between what happens behind closed doors vs. the illusion of light-heartedness and that "everything is ok." But maybe it was too abrupt?

I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it though-! looking forward to seeing where your story goes as well!

Lucca_Vendramel 2018-08-24 00:57:51 UTC #22

Hey there! I have a sci-fi fantasy webcomic about a girl named Cozmata and her caretakers, that get tangled in rescuing one of their peers after an indirect attack from a mysterious organization. In this comic you'll meet loads of interesting characters and scenarios, and I recommend you stay tuned as the story is updated with new pages every 2 days. It is heavily based on Steven Universe, so if you like it, might be a nice comic for you! I will surely appreciate your feedback.