Finally making the leap! Would love some feedback on the storyboard!

@rosenw_ltz Valse
Mon, 08 Feb 2021 23:43:03 +0000

@rosenw_ltz wrote:

Whoa! Just from reading these two scenes, I'm already intrigued. I like that you got right into the action without infodumping, which is important to get readers hooked right away. I looked at them on mobile and desktop and your font is nice and legible, and the spacing is very good.

I noticed you have a lot of establishing shots, which isn't a bad thing at all but you may have to draw a lot of backgrounds! I ended up combining a lot of my dialogue-less panels and replacing small bgs with flats/gradients, but of course this all depends on the creator and their comic style.

Your art is really polished and I think this'll be big when it releases