Finally making the leap! Would love some feedback on the storyboard!

@nixxusnibelheim Nixxus
Mon, 08 Feb 2021 22:34:53 +0000

Hello everyone. I decided to work on my comic for real and keep working on it 'til it's done.
I will use this thread to update you all and hopefully I can make the project better with your inputs!

Right now I only have the first two scenes storyboarded, it's rough but hopefully, it's clear enough!
I'm not looking for specific feedbacks so good or bad, I would like to hear! Thank you

Episode 1, part 1/5: https://imgur.com/a/0vvIk6T

A bit of context, Off-Grid is a cyberpunk horror webtoon. I'm trying to offer a cinematic experience through this format. Taking inspiration from movies, anime/manga and videogames I love such as Akira, Drive, Blade Runner (1&2), Perfect Blue, Yakuza, Ruiner, Evangelion...

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