First-time writer looking for constructive feedback :)

@SoulMage Kane
Mon, 28 Feb 2022 15:37:12 +0000

Hi guys, I have been into graphic novels/manga/manhua for a while now and decided to try to write my own story that hopefully can be turned into one as well someday. I would love some constructive feedback as an inexperienced non-native speaker writer. Thank you all in advance!

Bodhi's Quest

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