Forum Game: Judge My Art!

[shatterjure]

I have an idea!
Post your random works of art, fanart, comic art etc... here and have other people judge it!

EDIT;
Rules, yes i forgot rules:
1. Try being descriptive when judging,
2. Try to find both pros AND cons,
3. Post your own along with the critique
so that it may also get judged.
4. Judge it on a scale from 1 to 10 (personal opinion welcome)

[Kayke]

I think in order for this to work you're going to need to set some rules. Does the person posting have to judge the art before theirs? Are they to judge it on a scale? Are there criteria?

I'm not sure a free-for-all of people posting and making judgement is a good idea.

[acealmansoori]

Guess im the first one~ heres a pre concept art I did of my main character of my comic LostMyth

Reply: @phenomenom9 Thank you so much<3 I guess it's because how I shade my characters that it seems encroaching. Thank you for your kind words ;w;<3 Love the expression on Zack's face ^^

[R.n.P]

Your art is really good especially with your proportions and body structure, it reminds me on anime but on the other hand the ice that is around his face seems like it is encroaching into his eye since you didn't shade below the eye unless your main character is ice itself and not an ice manipulator but leaving that behind I'm really stunned by the art
Here's mine from my comic THE LAST SAMURAI, he is the main character, his name is Zack Wandaz

[MissMagicGirl]

I really like the pose and how much movement there is in the picture. Also I like how you put a new speech bubbel for every new word. It really makes me read it in an other way. More exhausted and seriously. Interesting way of doing it. Maybe something I´ll try myself.
I like that it is traditional art and that it is made in pencil. Maybe more background would have been nice but it is still a wonderful picture that makes me curious about your story. I will check it out : )

Here is the first page of my comic Magic Advisor with my main character Lizzy Vinter ^_^

[indagold]

Your work has a unique style to it although it feels like shading/lighting/environment needs a lot of work. I think if there was some depth to the backgrounds they would stand out. They all fall flat. The second panel sorta works because there is a sense of perspective. Maybe look up shading/lighting techniques for backgrounds and how to incorporate it into a flatter minimalist approach where it may work.

I'm uploading new concept art for a comic that's in the works. My current comics i'm uploading are old. It's very mixed media.

[russell_m_ols]

In both the images you've provided there's a strong sense of tone from your excellent choice of lighting, color usage and staging. Am I right in guessing that the backgrounds are 3D generated? You've done well to make the spaces real and detailed without going overboard on information. I'd also say that what I think is the 2D element of the fox in the first image is sitting in the 3D image fairly harmoniously. Great use of bringing light in to blend the two mediums together. Without providing a single word I can already see that there's a story here. If I had any criticism, it would be that the body of the fox could be pushed in either two directions: a. More towards a real fox or b. more anthropomorphized. At the moment, the arms and hips need a bit more form, although it's slight, really. Love the compositions and am intrigued by the second image. It reminds me of something from a Lucasarts game...like it could of been a set for Grim Fandango. Very cool. Can't wait to see more.

Here's the most recent page from my webcomic Gateway City:

[Melinda]

Edit : sorry, didn't see the rule thoroughly before o_O
For @russell_m_ols: i think your art is very great! I love how you do the background, the shading and your anatomy pretty good!
But the lady in the bottom (with white hair), her head slightly look a little bit strange, maybe because her hair look more fuller to left.
But you're really greatt! I hope i can shade my art like you did
Sorry for my bad english :"))

Pleasee judge my art >_<
Recently i feel depressed because i can not draw anatomy. My anatomy drawings are so stiff. Any advice perhaps? :")
This is a meme of my webcomic Kyun and Hana >v<

And this is an upcoming page of Kyun and Hana

[Gaspode12]

I guess I'll judge the last two since one seems to have been skipped.

@russell_m_ols your page is simply stunning! It's full of atmosphere and the lighting and colours are great. If I had to find a flaw, which it is hard to do, I would say that the purple patch at the bottom of the stairs in panel 2 doesn't quite gel with the rest of the tones. That's being super picky though.

@melindasavenia I think that your anatomy is pretty good! If only I could draw so well! The First Pic in particular looks full of movement and activity which creates a fun atmosphere and makes me want to get to know the characters. You are right though that some of the poses do look a little bit stiff. The sleeping girl particularly. Its something to do with her shoulders, maybe if she was lying totally flat with her head turned to the side instead?

Here is my, somewhat simplistic in comparison, offering: the latest strip from my comic All Fingers and Thumbs. I would love to know what people think. Any ways it can be improved? you might have to click the link to see it clearly as it looks a little pixelated here.