Sorry for the wait!
I gotta say your story is very interesting. Daily collisions with girls wouldn't seem like a bad curse to have but Rudra convinced me other wise (lol). I love the clever humor your adding in to your comic, pretty well done.
However, despite how good the jokes are, they can be misread due to the way you format your speech bubbles. Often times it's not clear which characters they are pointing to...
I'm assuming the conversation is supposed to be read like this:
but due to the way you've formatted it, some might read it like this:
or sometimes the order of the conversation is not clear, examples following:
you can still tell who's saying what due to the context but I suggest adding stems so it's a bit easier to comprehend:
I suggest getting someone to proofread your comics to see if they can grasp what's going on during their first read-through.
Another thing I noticed is that your anatomy is a bit awkward at times, I can't put my finger on everything but there is one thing I can say with confidence.
The proportions of the face, you tend to squish the facial features to the bottom of the face and leave a lot of blank space on the forehead.
There is one last thing I feel the need to say, but this is just personal opinion, in the second episode you start it off with a block of text. I gotta admit the art in the background is pretty but I felt that this seemed a bit lazy. A dump like this might turn off readers, after all they are reading a comic. People read these so that they can have images to go along with text.
That being said. Your series seems extremely promising! Sure there's room for improvement, but I'm certain we can expect a lot from you in the future!