Oh, yayy! I really need feed back and improvement suggestions. Plus, I like to share my stories and characters.
(P.S. I'm a plot twist enthusiast, so it get better as the story goes on)
sooo, this is my story, and it's about well, uh, Romeo and Juliet, but the BL version? I had no idea what i was daydreaming of in English class, but uh, this one kinda sorta just happened.
So instead of meeting at a party and falling in love and getting married in TWO DAYS after they meet(who DOES that?), the main characters are next door neighbors who became secret childhood friends, and the ball is when they realize that they loved each other...yada yada yada...who am I kidding? I can't describe this, I need to sleep, so just check it out. (please)
Oh yeah, the theme is beautifully tragic love, you'll understand if you stick to the story