Hi there, very fresh author (if I can even call myself that) on this platform. While I'm working on mustering up the courage to actually post my work I'd be happy to give yours a look and tell you what I think. Not as a 'tit-for-tat' type of deal (though I'm always happy for any comments/reviews/etc), just me wanting to give something to the community (and also stay in my comfort zone just a little longer).
I should probably mention that I, unfortunately, have zero artistic talent. Still happy to take a look at your comic if you'd like, but will probably not be of much help on the visual front.
If you're interested feel free to leave me a comment here or send a message. Will try to get to whatever I can
Edit: wow this has caught more attention than I was anticipating. Will try to get to whoever left a comment here, but it might take some time.
Another edit: apparently I'm limited in both the number of messages and replied I can provide as a new member. Will do my best to get back to as many people as soon as I can. Also since a lot of you asked, I uploaded the first two chapters on my story (can be found here: https://tapas.io/series/Youre-It-surihpas/info), but that still does not mean you have to read them or give your opinion in return. This to me remains the same offer, regardless of it