Not so Emo
Alright so, I've been drawing this comic for close to seven years now (in may~), but the reason I'd like a review on the third chapter is mainly because I was on a three year hiatus due to medical issues from mid point of chapter 2, so there's some jumping in art style & writing quality between the chapters. Also the first chapter was finished in 2013, so I've had plenty of time to review it myself, and there is a lot I am not happy about it (especially first 20 or so pages look horrible, and the last 20 pages have cringy & forced jokes). Also the third chapter was always supposed to be like, the turning point of the comic since it features multiple catalysts. ANYWAY, this all aside, I'd like to ask if anyone would be willing to read the chapters 1-2 for context, but only review the third one(chapters 2.5 & chapter 3 that is, since the half chapters are like a prologue) 'w'. Personally I like the third chapter a lot, and I think it's the best so far, but it's hard to get critical comments in tapas because people are so nice here. But I'd like to keep on improving with each chapter, so critical comments would be more than welcome 'w'
Thanks in advance, if anyone takes this up <3