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Here's my blurb for Chewing Gum - An Angel's Mission:
Discover music, magic, and love!
The world of two members of The No Name Band turns into a rock star ride when they meet the two hottest guys, Blaine Harmony and Soul Lullaby of The Jupits.
A huge rivalry is about to begin as The Band Gig’s competition approaches.
They all have one goal, one dream— to perform with Michael Serenade, their favorite singer, and sign a two-year contract with the best record label in the world.
Will their rivalry have a twist? Could disaster be in the air or could love rule the day? Will they give up their ultimate dream, for love?
Two rival rock bands brought together by a miracle - kept together by... chewing gum?