Hullo, welcome to Tapastic! We hope you have a great time here
Now, let's talk about your comic:
Your persona has really great, vivid expressions. I also like how the camera zooms in as the emotion intensifies.
However, I had a hard time understanding what was happening until the third panel. Next time, try to zoom out a little so we can actually see what she's doing. Also, cleaning up lines that get out of the panel or clash with other lines will make it look neater.
Good luck with your comic!