@Kalebell
You write like I do! LOL! Here's the general idea, aaaaaand go! 
I think ballet is a perfect backdrop to bring about the lesson you are wanting to convey. Dancers have to look and act a certain way, be a certain weight, all in an effort to convey an image that isn't real but people want it to be.
I've subbed to your story and I can't wait to read more!!!
