Here's my slice of life comic about the silly demon Lucy who just got a office job and is trying her best.
Thanks so much for taking a look at my comic! Yeah I know this is a controversial topic and it's intended to be like that. So I don't really much care about trolls actually, I can take it 
Also: I like people like you too! Taking time to support others. That is awesome and really noble of you.
Feedback can often be quite helpful. And hopefully the two "episodes" (I tend to call them "issues", due to them being the individual issues I would release in floppy form if it were a print comic) will be interesting enough to go further. But I should warn you that issue 2 is rated Mature, for nudity. I mean, it's censored for Tapas guidelines (actually, a little over-censored than what's required, because I'm not so comfortable with the early-issue nudity anymore), but it's still the fact.
Superheroes, alternate universes, LGBT characters, a few fun things rolled into one.
My webcomic: That's B's Life and Up In The Clouds
hi im folowing u this is min x) https://tapas.io/episode/19444231
Third round and last one ( I guess)
@neidarous Making the speech in another font is a great idea (I might even steal). Your story got a nice harmony and the story line is interesting and developing at a nice speed. On top your art stuff looks great. Thumbs up from me 
@noenoh German titel 
The illustration are cute and Miriam feels like a really strong character. The town/village is quite scary but the hot guy is just 
even though he's scary too. There are minor spilling mistakes, but easily over-read.
@Nezothecat Slice of life is normally not my cup of tea but I enjoyed the first few episodes and will read on. The illustrations are a nice touch and make the story more colourful. The writing is well and it got a pleasant harmony to it. The only mistake i found were the " and “, the first once are used for quotes the second for speech. You used most of the time the first once for all your speech. But I see it a lot and i think Tapas converts it. But I don't know for sure, if you know please enlighten me.
@Tinkerton Someone is using the Mature button!!!!! Yes, thank you 
I liked the few episodes i read but I won't be digging in it anytime soon. My head isn't in the right place for this right now (I also stopped my Novel with a similar topic), but when I recover I will come back. The mistake I noticed is that your paragraphs are quite big. Makes reading sometime a chore and people stop mid episodes. But the melody of your sentences are good for such a topic. Please just watch out for trolls, they come for Novels like this quite often!
@DreamyPastel Mad cliffhanger... but I am lucky and the next episodes were already published 
The start is strong and leads somewhere. The good think is i don't know where and that's what you want. One think if Seth would have hit me with the ball, this ball would have went straight into his face.. I don't know how people can be so calm and that's while reading?? Just in aww.
@techstylesstudio I looove it Lucy is me in every social situation... I didn't find anything wrong, it well illustrated, as far I can tell the characters are thought threw and know their place. The colour scheme fits hell perfectly and grey haired guy is chef kiss (sorry I forgot his name). I am grateful that I found this one, it reminds me of some comic i already read but I can't remember...And it's good to know that hell is like my workplace 
@karamesser thanks for the warning and thanks for using the Mature button! Not a lot use it..
I loved the fight scenes and yes I will read on. I don't know about the nudity thing but it's well managed in your comic. The only thing I would love to see more is background. I can think that it's a lot of work but it would make the comic even better. In Ep 2. the grass texture was already a great start. I hope you get what I mean with this 
@kelsea_dove It just your first Episodes and I don't want to go rough with you. I liked the beginning and relaxing to see a few Novels from the characters POV for once. I don't (never) write from this view so I am not in a position to judge your writing the only thing I saw was the the start wit or.. or...or.., it's of-throwing and it's a shame that it happened in the first few sentences. And for my personal taste I would have cut the episode after "I should've went inside.." that would have been a nice cliffhanger. But my personal taste and not yours, just wanted to show you another perspective.
@VLN The space background was a brilliant idea, it's cute and a nice touch to the overall story. The writing is well, I didn't saw any spelling or grammar mistakes. But the font is sometimes so blurry compared to the illustration, to the point is hard to read. And I don't know if I should mentioned this because the comic is obviously not close to being realistic but I will anyway. The last scene in ep 2 is unrealistic the bird wouldn't have been shot at that angle. (just joking!)
Thank you so much for the feedback! I mark all my episodes mature due to language and so people will know what they are getting into 
I will be checking out your novel and thank you for giving mine a chance! 🖤
First of all THANK YOU SO MUCH for taking the time of checking and reviewing my (and others) stuff.
hehehe hes ones of my ocs thats under the clasification of "me asusta pero me gusta" xD and yeah you are totally right, specially in the second chapter I didnt even checked it oTL Im considering to ask for a beta-reader since english is not my first language but it makes me anxious bothering others even if paid
Aaa!! Thank you so much for your feedback! I'm glad you don't really know where it's going yet as I thought my comic might have been a bit predictable. And yes, being hit in the face with the ball would've gone differently with me haha! Joyce is mostly used to it at this point (sibling things, am I right?). Again, thank you so much for checking out my comic and for going through all of these other people's comics! I'm really grateful that you spent your time doing this for all of us 
Thank you for checking out my comic, I'm so glad you loved it and Lucy. I tried really hard to make her funny but relatable and I see that it worked, that makes me so happy.
My comic: https://tapas.io/series/Anime-fights
The Connections is my novel.
Blurb: In the beginning Humanity and energy lived as one. Humanity harvested pure matter from the environment to feed this energy and in return this energy gave the host an unique ability to help it survive, this symbiosis was called "The Connections". As humanity grew more prosperous and advanced in culture, so did the Connection's bond which could only be established through a moment of original creativity. Life on Toreoth was ideal, until the social hierarchy collapsed. This collapse was caused by humanity, which had expended nearly all of its original creativity. With this loss humanity lost the Connection as well. As the years pass, the connection get's established in fewer and fewer people, until one fateful day when the connection was severed entirely, but before that happened the connection was established in one person named Zach Carter. Given orders by the very connection itself, Zach and his friends must find and replenish the three source crystals that give the connection it's power and save humanity before a deadly sickness wipes humanity from existence.
