What I'm seeing are two common issues with writing fight/action scenes in general. One of which is the list-writing. People tend to write fight scenes like they're listing events in real time, and this can often come off as a bit stale/boring/slow-paced because you're focusing more on listing out every motion and mapping out what's happening rather than how it's written. And, second, while there is a time and place to write out even little movement in an action scene, most of the time it simply isn't needed. Condensing larger portions of the less important events can speed things up and keep the pacing consistent.
I wrote a story recently, so here is a snippet of one of the fight scenes that is (I hope >_<) a semi-decent example of a condensed fight where not every little motion is written in depth but the general gist still gets across:
Also I made a powerpoint for a lecture I gave a few years ago on fight scenes, it breaks down the method I use, has some examples of published novels, breaks down the different types of fights, and gives a few more tips. So, you can check that out as well:
I hope that helps??? >_< But don't worry, writing fight scenes is a butt to do and takes a lot of pre-planning to get it right.