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Hello guys
So this is for anyone to get help developing their characters and general assistance with their story plot.

I'll go first:
so i'm working on a comic, and i need help with one of the antagonists.
the antagonist is Tom, he is average height, he has brown hair and dark brown eyes.
he isn't very popular in school, and this ties to his insecurity issues of feeling invisible and being referred to as a loser, that word is like a trigger for him.
the protagonist is called sam, sam is the unpopular new kid, but he already had a childhood friend who went to the school, and he makes another friend, so he isn't alone like Tom.
How they met:
Tom was bumped into at his locker, and he dropped his books and pencil case. sam who was passing by decided to help him pick up his stuff.
sam begins to invite Tom to eat lunch with him and generally he tries to include him, sam's friends don't really mind this strange new person and they are very friendly with Tom.
but something happens and Tom (insecurity issues) and he begins to get jealous of toby and overall, tries to replace him and push him out of the group. So he does things like dressing like him, cutting and dying his hair to look like sam, almost like he wants to become sam.
but this area of the story is where i fall short, i'm having a hard time coming up with that something that drives Tom of the edge and makes him get jealous of sam, or begin to blame sam for his position (dunno), and i'm also finding it hard dealing with the characters thought pattern, any ideas?
thank you all so much.

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If you want to make a plot really believable, you need to make sure that when it's influenced by the characters, it makes sense for their personality.
You probably didn't include the personality traits on this thread since it would be too long but so far all I know about Sam is that: he's the protag
and all I know about Tom is: He is insecure, and I assume that he becomes evil or something later on.

I suggest really spending some time fleshing out your characters in your mind so you get a good idea of how they would respond to certain situations, that might help you figure out what to do with Tom :slight_smile:

i think tom is the kind of guy that likes sam because of their similarities but his jealousy slowly builds up when sam has traits that tom doesn't have like being friendly/more approachable and he snaps when he realizes nobody really wanted to be friends with him if it weren't because of sam. you can also add a love interest that of course, ends up with sam.

and sam is one of those "i did nothing wrong" main characters (ex. kaneki ken, eren jaeger, etc) whose life gets messed up really bad.

anyway, those are just my opinions

Tom starts to like Sam, that is more secure, cheerful, successfull. He starts to envy him, especially when a girl that Tom ever secretly (for his unsecure issues) starts to flirt with Sam.

Maybe it's just me but I think instead of Sam being the protagonist of the story, you could make Tom the protagonist? This isn't really a good vs bad story and his insecurity issues sounds like the most plausible reason as to why he would go to the edge. I think you should start with his motivations like what he wants from Sam, what does Sam have that Tom doesn't, etc, because it sounds like you want to write a psychological story but it can also be something really simple. Hope this helps!

As a teacher, I can say that unfortunately a lack of popularity doesn't come out of the blue. Tom probably has some problems at home too that are causing him to struggle making friends at school and lash out.

This is an important point to explain Tom`s behavior.

Maybe Tom has a mental disorder of some kind. That would explain behavior like this:

It would also explain why he doesn`t have friends. Kids can be cruel with people who lack social skills. That would keep him as a tragic character and explain why his antagonistic behavior is in-character.

Exactly. His problems at home may explain why he is so unstable.

Your plot should be somewhat based on your character. For example, in any Doomsday comic (DC Comics) Superman is always there. That’s because Doomsday and Superman are connected in certain ways. Superman is one of the only people that can take D.Day down. D.Day is one of the only people that can take Superman down.

The plot is that Superman and D.Day are basically equal.

I personally think that the plot should be almost fully based on your character. My character Laven goes through a lot. If you switched my character with yours, the story wouldn’t work out; My character is for my story.

This is my 2 cents I’ll add.