Hey guys, so I recently finished the third chapter of my comic and really wanted some advice from the storytellers in this site if there are any problems with the characterization, pacing, and others. If there are, please point it out to me and if you can, give me advice on how to fix it. The document is attached as well as the link to read the comic:
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